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Naruto Haikus - On Crack.

Flown by Mithlin At September 18, 2006, 03:33 PM

Evening shadows play –
Del’cate shadows on her face
As Hinata laughs.

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Whisper of a smile
On Neji’s pale lips, trembling --
Like wings as they fall.

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A beat of frail wings
A splash of color, sunlit –
Shino’s eyes flick’ring.

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Sun-drenched locks, they dance -
Oh! How they remind me of spring
‘Zure sky like her eyes.
(Mithlin - now, I know 2nd line has 8 syllables, but I didn't want to omit the Oh!)

Ahehehe. Ang tawag jan, walang magawa. tell me what you think, okay?

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hatori

Comment posted on September 18th, 2006 at 05:18 PM

See. You can write poems too. You're the one who's talented. ^^

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mithlin

Comment posted on September 18th, 2006 at 05:38 PM

*falls over* Noin, this are haikus - 3 sentence poems.. I was thinking more of a full-pledge poem - 4 stanzas and stuff like that.

...if you would remember, I showed you my poem (3 years ago? uhh.. 4 years ago?) which was incomplete. I never did complete it.

*prods Noin* We're both TALENTADO. Period. :P

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hatori

Comment posted on September 19th, 2006 at 11:12 AM

Well, that would be quite hard for me to accept. You see, I don't really have much confidence with myself. ^^

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mithlin

Comment posted on September 19th, 2006 at 11:39 AM

Ack, Noin-chan, here I thought that after four years, you would have solved that.

Take my word for it. (Kahit na medjo dubious ang word ko. Hehe.). You're talented. You have a way with words. Please accept that truth and reality.

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hatori

Comment posted on September 19th, 2006 at 02:10 PM

'Course not. It's really a bad trait of mine. Though not only you have said so. But I guess I don't think of myself that great. Guess it's something I have to live with for a long time. Hehe.

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mithlin

Comment posted on September 19th, 2006 at 03:31 PM

*prods with a spork* Ha! See? See?

Well, maybe time will come and you'll accept the 'sad' reality. XD

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zeniram_anibru (guest)

Comment posted on September 18th, 2006 at 03:49 PM

i like hinata. it's a contradictory though about her laughing -- because i haven't seen her laugh (havent watched all episodes yet).

anyway, i dont know really what to comment because i am not used to haikus. hehehe... :-D

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mithlin

Comment posted on September 18th, 2006 at 04:59 PM

I like Hinata too - a majority of my drabbles and fiction are about her. :) Not that much of a contradiction though - she does laugh, in one of the episodes.. although don't ask me, I don't really keep up with the episode numbers ahehehe.

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zeniram_anibru (guest)

Comment posted on September 18th, 2006 at 08:07 PM

i like hinata too... and i like the naruto-hinata pairing :loveeyes:

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mithlin

Comment posted on September 18th, 2006 at 08:09 PM

That's nice. :) I usually like cracky pairings - SasuHina, NejiHina, ShinoHina, KabuHina, and KakaHina. I do read Naruhina, once in a while.

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zeniram_anibru (guest)

Comment posted on September 18th, 2006 at 08:22 PM

nejihina! interesting pairing. so it's like some incest occurs between them? i like it! :D i like incest too. im still intrigued by the itachi x sasuke pairing.

and by the way, i also imagine kiba x hinata pairing. :)

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